Post by Scribbler on Apr 2, 2009 17:44:12 GMT -8
And up with the new chapter:
Ephemera: The Stirrings of the Envious
As per usual, this thread is for discussion, critique, comments, questons, etc.
Anyone figured out what the titles are referencing yet? It'll be blindingly clear sometime in the next three chapters... I hope... but there aren't too many clues laying around just yet.
There's a lot of bits in this chapter that I wonder if they were necessary. I still think I should have taken out the exposition about the Gravewalk, especially since I'm not sure how soon that will be relevant - I deleted about half the information on it already, but it might have done just as well to leave barely any reference at all. Bailey's character hasn't much endeared to me by this point, but she has her moments; the next series is where I tend to like her more.
Ephemera: The Stirrings of the Envious
As per usual, this thread is for discussion, critique, comments, questons, etc.
Anyone figured out what the titles are referencing yet? It'll be blindingly clear sometime in the next three chapters... I hope... but there aren't too many clues laying around just yet.
There's a lot of bits in this chapter that I wonder if they were necessary. I still think I should have taken out the exposition about the Gravewalk, especially since I'm not sure how soon that will be relevant - I deleted about half the information on it already, but it might have done just as well to leave barely any reference at all. Bailey's character hasn't much endeared to me by this point, but she has her moments; the next series is where I tend to like her more.